Eyes Like Hers

I’ve never seen eyes like hers.
I’ve seen eyes that weaken knees, eyes that made my stomach flip, eyes that wobble the earth, but never eyes like these.

Eyes that cripple.

All the joy was a fathom from the ground. A street party in St. Lucia. The Friday night “Jump Off,” with rum concoctions, laughing tourists, entrepreneurial locals, food scents wafting, pockets of exhaled ganja, flirtatious smiles, happy chatter, the bliss of a warm Caribbean night.

All the joy was a fathom from the ground—misery at our knees.

I saw her eyes. Those black eyes. Tan fur. The color of all island dogs, where years of mixing have led to the same dull brown an artist gets on her palette when all the colors go together. The color of all. Of none.

A dozen dogs mingle, their ribs beneath taut skin, the puppies learning to beg, more skittish than the adults, darting among the knees, weak with hunger, the smell of fish and chicken and ribs an impossible taunt away. Looking up. Wondering. Waiting.

They’re not the only ones begging. Yesterday, a man missing a shoe asks me to buy him some chicken in the grocery store. Tonight, the locals mingle and beg as well. Hands clutching at my elbow. The two men who helped me around the docks both ask if I’ll buy them some food. The dogs watch. The one with the black eyes. Leg lame, body thin as a rail. Never seen a dog so skinny before. Where I’m from, this is a medical condition. Here, it’s the condition. But skinnier than the rest and hobbling around.

Those eyes.

You’ve never seen hurt like this. Desperation. Silent desperation. She needs to eat or she’ll die. Food everywhere, going in the trash, watching it go in the impossible trash, and this isn’t discomfort, isn’t a pang that will ease, this is final days. This is the dog that can’t dart in quick enough, can’t limp to salvation, is wasting away.

And the joy of this Caribbean night turns to tears. Like I say, those eyes cripple me. $10EC buys a skewer of chicken. The dog has been waiting by the stall, watching, begging. Silent grace. Not barking, or scratching, or saying, “Can’t you see I’m dying?” Just that look. Head cocked. One ear flopping. Big wet eyes. Beseeching. Begging. Dying.

There’s a line at the stall. Wasn’t one half an hour ago, when I bought food for the guys from the marina. I wait. Fumble out a $10EC bill. Try to wave down one of the women behind the counter. Don’t need a plate, just one of these skewers, I can grab it myself, just take the money, I can leave it right here, but she doesn’t see me. A long line. People buying people food. Not even that hungry, really. Just time to eat. Excuse me. Ma’am. Please.

I look around, make sure the dog is still there. She is. Watching. Waiting. Dying.

The lady wipes down a counter. Can’t get her. The line creeps. The food is right there. Should just grab it, pay later, leave the bill, anything. I hop from one foot to the other. Finally, she sees me. Tells me one minute. Why do I feel so impatient? It’s those eyes. Crippling.


A skewer, I say. No plate. No, that’s okay. Thanks. Here.

Tin foil is pulled free, a napkin, all the unnecessary accoutrements. Finally, the food. I turn to the dog,

and she’s gone.

I look. Down the side street. Behind the stalls. Plenty of hungry dogs, but none like her, with that limp, that frailness, those fearful final days. Here’s a puppy. Here’s a taller dog. But where are those eyes?

I ask my friends, and they don’t know which dog. The streets are crowded. A forest of shins and knees. A dozen dogs. I mill through, the chicken warm in my hands, that hungry searching like a boy who saw a girl who maybe noticed the boy. Looking for that stranger in a crowd of strangers. To reunite with what came and went in a glimpse.


What if I can’t find her?

And what am I doing?

A party, and my heart is breaking.

No saving anything. Hubris to think. This is their life. Their normal. Nothing to rescue. Just a cycle of breed and breed and no one to feed. Generations of dull brown fur. Thin ribs emerging from thin ribs. Life clinging on.

She’s gone. Giving up. Slunk off. Dead within the week. A corpse beneath a porch. Nothing can live that’s all bone. No more marrow to squeeze. And what would I do anyway? Delay it a week? Prolong the suffering? Just to ease my pain? Is this a selfish act? Is this for me? The chicken in my hand grows cold. Someone spills their rum drink. There is laughter while a puppy gives the pavement a wary lick.


that limp.

those eyes.

I approach, pull a piece of chicken loose, and she takes it like she’s never taken food from a hand before. A quick, mistrustful snap of teeth. A disbelieving bite. Grabbing for the rest all at once, but there’s a dangerous skewer there. And I fear too much at once will get her sick. This is a dying dog. This is a heartbreak. This is me blinking away tears. This is me wondering how I was happy ten minutes prior. This is the misery beneath the party, the hunger on a warm Caribbean night.

Piece by piece. Somber. Taking each bite. Watching for more. Bounty. Not crumbs. Enough to last a day or two. Who am I doing this for?

The chicken is gone. A skewer to lick. I rub her head, and she’s strangely calm. Doesn’t flinch back. Pushes in. Leans. Waits for more. More of this contact as much as food. More of this love. Just the pad of a thumb, rubbing her forehead, that divot between bone ridges, skin so thin, an abrasion along one ear, that lovely brown fur, and those eyes.

She leans into the caress, hungry too for this, and I have to stand and walk away while I can still walk. It’s not yet nine o’clock. I’m told the party really gets started after ten. Just you wait. But I can’t. I’m ready to go, I tell my friends. A profound sadness, and I know it’s crazy, I know this is life, the way of things, the cycle. There was a cat in the street today, one who didn’t make it across. This is the way things are, down by our knees, in the cereal aisle at the grocery store, on the marina docks, on the street corners, in the house next door. Just the way of things. The look in someone’s eyes.



33 responses to “Eyes Like Hers”

  1. Literal tears. You’re a poet.

  2. Beautiful Hugh; one of the most lyrically poetic short stories I have ever read.

  3. Hugh, she’s your Wayfind soulmate. I have a lovely doggie life-jacket that will fit her perfectly. I’ll send it to you. Email me at terbriamon@aol.com with where I can send it. Save her. Love her. You’ll be loved back in a way you never realized was possible. <3

    1. I’m an animal lover……this grabbed at my heart and yanked it. If you rescue this dog, she will love you back unconditionally. I’ve seen it happen. I also get it. Sometimes its just not the right time. For a moment in time, she gave you something special, and you gave it back. Life goes on………

  4. This makes my heart ache. She needs you!

  5. Did you keep her?

    We’re waiting for our dogs to pass via natural attrition before we set sail. Fears of dog overboard, veterinary difficulties, and border hassles (despite all the blogs with happy cruiser dogs). Still I doubt we’ll say dogless long. I expect we’ll see a pair of eyes and be lost.

    I’ve missed your posts. Want to know about sailing around the Cape, sailing north, Annapolis, and now. Take a day off and catch us up. We’re living vicariously through you.

    1. He’s been posting a lot of updates in his Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/hughhowey

  6. Thank you so very much for turning me into a blubbering fool. It shows, however, that you have a good soul. I judge people by how they treat animals. I’m surprised she’s not on your catamaran, learning her sea-legs.

  7. So so sad. No words just tears.

  8. A heartbreaking short story shows that the islands are not all idyllic.

  9. Just heartbreaking. I’d be a blubbering fool standing in the street. God bless you for feeding her. You’re a good man, Huge, with a gentle soul.

  10. Love this, so much!

  11. I will go hug my dog right now.

  12. You may have only prolonged the inevitable (and heartbreak) but you gave her a wonderful moment of love and connection.

  13. “The greatness of a nation can be judged by the way it’s animals are treated” Ghandi
    But what of an island ? Thank you for your humanity.

  14. So sad but I hate to tell you all that you will encounter then everywhere. We saw them in the Yucatan and in Puerto Rico when I livedthere they clled the indigenous dogs Satos. I have a picture of my own father and I holding one who strolled up to our table during dinner on the beach on island off the caribbean side of Mexico.

  15. Damn, first Adele, and now you. I’ve officially used up my limit on tears for this year. Music and pen to paper, A genius talent.

  16. You cannot save them all but you gave her compassion she has never experienced before. Someone cried for her, fed her, and pet her. She may not have a lot of life left, but she found out what love is. She can rest easier when the time comes because you showed her how great humans can be.
    P.S. I bawled like a baby reading this passage. I have compassion for animals and I know exactly how you felt in those moments. Let your light shine on. It will shine brighter with each small act of kindness.

  17. Oh, Hugh, you break my heart!

  18. Hugh, I literally have tears writing this. Never doubt your talent or compassion because you had me looking for that dog with you. I had my wife read this, she’s a mess now. Enjoy your travels and good luck Hugh.

  19. Such a pleasant surprise. Not that I’d pegged you into a hole, but I would have expected something subversive, apocalyptic, dystopian, time travel, anything. But not something about a real experience that left you heartbroken and without words. I generally don’t do romance, but I’ve never disliked anything you’ve written, that I’ve read, so far.

    (insert stock pic of a folded origami crane)
    Thank you Mr Howey
    Ur numba one fan, Ronnie J Darling

  20. She looks like a sweetie. Shockingly thin though. You gave her a little love when she needed it. And maybe she gave you back a little too.

  21. I just adopted a stray and currently sitting at the vet office for final booster and verify the neuter went okay. Your story touches my heart. Wish they could all be rescued.

  22. This is beautiful.
    I’m not crying. YOU’RE crying. There’s something in my eye. I just cut up an onion. Shut up.

  23. A tear down my cheek.

  24. michele miller heeder Avatar
    michele miller heeder

    So heartbreaking

  25. beautiful – so so beautiful.

  26. This made me cry, I wish I could rescue them all.

  27. Hugh–
    If you cared that much–and weren’t just luxuriating in your own sense of compassion–why didn’t you rescue the dog? One saved is better than none.

    1. Luxuriating? I think you might want to give it another read…

  28. odd coincidence – just stumbled across this quote from Charlie Chaplin ; “He who feeds a hungry animal feeds his soul.”

  29. Beautifully written post about one of the saddest aspects of world travel. My wife and I are wrapping up a cycling trip around the world and the dogs. Oh, the dogs. Everywhere we’ve been outside of western Europe and North America, we encounter so many hungry dogs. Dogs starved as much for food as for attention. It breaks our heart time and time again. Kudos to you for taking the moment to feed one, even if only to postpone its starvation. But you were lucky. The dog disappeared briefly while you tried to buy it food. It’s the ones who follow you before you feed them that really break your heart.

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