Narrowing it down…
2 responses to “Narrowing it down…”
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Striking, for sure. But I don’t care for it. Maybe I have read too much true crime, but it makes me thinks of a body in a grave or someone being buried alive. It does not evoke for me the things you want it to evoke, and it would turn me off from reading it. :-( But then, I’m extremely squeamish…
If you do go with this, I think you need maybe one more sentence added to the back cover. It’s ever-so-slightly too brief/sketchy. One or two more brief sentences to flesh it out (without becoming overly wordy) would really help sell the story.
I wish I could tell you I wholeheartedly love this one. :-(
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I wish you could, too! ;)
I’m not sold on the back cover text, either. I’m working on another version right now. If you come up with anything, let me know!
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